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Chapter 1 - The Cold Stream

A medium shot in a bright, modern living room set in natural daylight. An elderly woman with short, neat grey hair wearing a light blue button-down shirt stands over a baby in a white shirt sitting in a high chair. The baby is crying loudly. The woman holds a blue baby bottle tilted upside down directly above the baby's head. White milk flows continuously onto the baby's scalp and face. The background features clean white walls, a white sofa, and a wooden shelf with decorative items slightly out of focus. The camera is static, focusing tightly on the woman and the baby.

A thick white stream hits the child's scalp.

The baby gasps, tiny arms flailing against the plastic tray of the high chair.

Milk runs down past small, screwed-shut eyelids, pooling in the folds of a soft neck.

The plastic bottle tips further.

"Maybe now you'll stop wasting food."

The grandmother’s voice is dry, steady, like reading a grocery receipt.

A footstep squeaks on the polished floorboards.

A young woman in a white t-shirt stops dead in the archway.

Her eyes widen, her hands dropping a laundry basket full of folded baby clothes.

Small socks roll across the floorboards like scattered pebbles.

The baby lets out a high, ragged shriek.

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Milk dripping from his chin turns his white shirt completely translucent against his chest.

The young mother moves.

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